So I keep coming back to this image but not knowing where to go with it. Something about it is flat, missing. Maybe it's just too pastel. Maybe the bus just needs to be bolder, stronger...it gets lost in the background. Perhaps I will come back to this over the course of my blogging, visit different versions.
I am not sure whether to turn it into a screenprint at this point. It doesn't seem settled to the point of committing it to ink, but at the same time, maybe that's just what it needs, some ink, then some working into it, or over it.
I am very tired and I should get to bed -- maybe the bus will look brighter in the morning. Probably not.